User blog comment:HawkWD/The 23rd Hunger Games- A Trilogy/@comment-7317707-20130424003008/@comment-5082922-20130424054057

I think that almost everyone has a bit difficulty with the bloodbath. So much stuff happens and it's hard to get it all with (especially when you write in first person). The whole scene is so hectic and you want those hecticness mirroed in all your characters all at once but that's just not gonna happen, because you can't keep focus at 24+ characters all at once. You did a good job with it :3