User blog comment:Cashmere10/User blog:Cashmere10 : I am number 4 games/@comment-5645343-20140214100932

In relation to Jade's comment about your spelling and grammar/punctuation. You told her that you were rushing when you wrote that. I highly doubt this as, reading back through the comments, I notice you spell a word incorrectly in just about every sentence. I warn you that not many people will enjoy your Games unless you slow down, use some spellcheck or get somebody to edit your writing and use some synonyms to make your text more likeable. For example, instead of using the sentence:

"I look over at the cornucopia and watch as other tributes eye their way towards different supplies and backpacks in the cornucopia, wanting so badly to get to the cornucopia first."

Say something like:

"I look over at the cornucopia and watch as other tributes eye their way towards different supplies and backpacks in and around the golden horn, wanting so badly to get to the bloodbath first."

It's as simple as something like that. Please, take your time when writing as otherwise people will become uninterested and bored with your writing.