User blog comment:Jabberjay78/One Last Games/@comment-5082922-20130415205927

I  would take a paragraph from the last POV, but I have no idea which one to choose. I will try anyway.

"What they don’t know is that being alive and alone can be worse than being dead.That future victor will learn to love their dreams, to live in them as if they were real."

"If I could live in this moment, in this dream, forever, I would. If I could capture it, hold it in my hand, and place it in a little jar to keep on my windowsill, I would. Because the truth is, my life isn’t back in District 13. It isn’t on the victor’s throne, an idol for the nation to admire and shower with gifts. My life is here, with these people, away from harm, from suffering, and from death."

They're all great writing, and has very good word choice. To see the other side of it, is great. To see what she feels, it's really harsh to actually see what she feels. It makes you feel sad  yourself. It shows how even though you may be have won, you may not be the victor. It's great to see it from her view. It's really sad that she feels that way but i think that it's great you mention it. If she hadn't felt that way with winning, I wouldn't sympathice with her as much. It explains me exactly how Sydnee feels, which is just really great when I have to live myself into the character. These games were great, and I really hope they aren't you last!