User blog comment:ArleneLove'sTHG/Revenge: The 4th book of the Hunger Games/@comment-68.13.125.247-20120229233609

I read chapters one and two, and I'm wondering something. How is it possible that "It has been about twenty years since The Hunger Games," but 14-year-old Silver was around to watch Katniss sneak into the woods and be kissed by Gale? She wouldn't have been born...... There are quite a few spelling and grammar errors. Also, your writing needs to flow better. Sometimes it's very disorganized, which can make it difficult to understand. I hope my comments don't offend you. I know that I always want suggestions, comments, criticism, etc. on my writing, so I'm assuming you want the same. :)

To the person who said: "If you don't have something nice to say, don't say it," I disagree. The author of this story wanted to know what people thought of it, right? How can you improve your writing if nobody gives any criticism? Then you won't know how or where to improve.