User blog comment:Hybrid Shadow/The 100th Hunger Games: Through Soul and Mind/@comment-5864747-20131031062058

1. Well, even tho Riven´s scene was pretty uneventful, I do like just reading how she´s at :3 and I liked Flippy´s reaction to Sorcera dying, just like any normal person would do he carved words in her body with a sword xD

2. Riven hasn´t died yet, so idk

3. Details, the tone of gore and darkness, the feel and flow of the writing is also very good and makes sense most of the time. Though it´s lacking a bit in that I don´t get an immediate impression on how frightened and scared most of them are, as any child or teen would be in the situation. But that´s also really hard to pull of, from my own experience x3

4. Blondie.Dat hoe gon det date-raped