User blog comment:Blissfully Mine/The 376th Hunger Games/@comment-25302167-20140928015237/@comment-5760279-20140928025112

Sorry, not accepted.

Try to be a little bit more accurate with grammar and punctuation, and I would like the personality more detailed.

Also, Appearance was not included, and that's required. If you would, I would request that you re-write Thesil a little more easier for me to understand, as the backstory I am sort of confused on.