User blog comment:Epic Hobo/175th Hunger Games (Career Games)/@comment-70.246.52.201-20120727191425

Hey Venus can you be a critic for these POV's I'm writing? I really want your feedback and suggestions. Thxs. It's for the 74th Games. Her's the first few.

Marvel's POV

20...19...18...17...

I'm realy readyto just run in and get it over with.

16...15...14...13...12...

I glance at the other Tributes. The redhead girl from 5 is glancing around nervously. She's kind of sly. Could be dangerouse.

11...10...9...8...7...6...5...4...

Got it! The girl from 3 is small and weak. She will be my first target.

3...2...1...

The gong sounds and I sprint to a knife and the girl.

Amber's POV

I'm from District 3, unprepared for anything but inventing. So when the gong sounded I searched the Cornucopia for a wire. There! Right behind the swords in the mouth. I make a run for it.

"AAAHHH!" The boy from 1, Marvel, grabbed my hair and yanked it back. Suddenly he was on top of me. A searing pain in my chest and side. He smiled and ran off.

A few minutes later the boy from 5 dropped by my side and hit my throat with something sharp. Everything was going fuzzy. I reached my arm out to Marvel and searched his eyes for pity. There was none.

That's all I'll write for now, but I kind of mixed the book with the movie. Wish I could get an account to write this down but cant 'till after Nov. 18th. Hope you like it. Next POV's I wrote but wont post yet are Clove's and Cato's. Thxs again.

-CloveJohanna