User blog comment:HaraiGoshi345/The 400th annual Hunger Games award ceremony!/@comment-7173140-20140615224622/@comment-5864747-20140616190848

I agree with Lady. I´m sorry to pick on you for this, but I never found your writing especially enthralling. It´s too undetailed for my taste, which is what usually makes me interested in reading Games.

And your constant nagging on people getting emotional and starting to cry about your Games is really bugging me. First of all, in my experience (which isn´t too much tho) people don´t usually start to cry over Games. ''It´s the internet and it´s fictional characters. ''And, for people to acually start crying over some emotional bit in the story, it has to be acual detail and love put into the writing. When you literally write two sentences and call that a PoV. That´s just lazy, point blank. I´m not saying I´m much better, as I write too much for my Games and it´s very badly done, but I put a lot of detail into it. Every reaping pov has a minimum of 1700 words, every Train ride pov had a minimum of 2000 words and every training PoV had a minimum of 1000 words. Dedenne´s death scene PoV was three sentences. ''Three sentences. ''Once again, that´s just lazy.