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Name: Liliana Patterson | Teresa Silver | Luna Glitchturn | Huntress Scape | Trent Korey

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Advice: The Careers will attack the Anti-Careers today. Take out  Yuki with a poison arrow; since he only uses melee weapons he should be easy to kill from a distance. | Teresa, dip your sword in poison and kill Cari, who may be standing to the side away from the fighting. End the poor girl's life quickly with a stab to the heart. | Stay alone. Ally with any loners and set up traps that target people who are always looking up for tributes. If you see the Anti-Careers, speed away. If they come after you, Luna, then pretend to trip then cry and tell them "I just want to see Sparkles and Celestia again!" They'll let you go. | Huntress, I want you to leave the Anti-Careers to find Luna. Protect her, since all she wants is to get home. Protect her. | Trent, during the attack, target tributes with spears and knives, since they can be both melee and ranged tributes. Kill them all.

What did you like about my writing?

Everything. I love how you just kept wanting to read more after every POV.

What can I improve on?

Maybe you can make your writing a little more descriptive.

Did you like how your tribute(s) were portrayed?

Yes.

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At least every other day should have a POV in my opinion.

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