User blog comment:HawkWD/The 24th Hunger Games/@comment-7317707-20130903003035/@comment-5810244-20130903004112

Also, for that thing about the writing. Don't worry about it, your writing is fine. If you want me to just send you advice to improve, all I could think of is to just make sure you don't cluster up too many things in a paragraph. Space them out I guess and. . . I don't know. Just keep writing like you do. XD ???