User blog comment:Iluvgale/PAR-TAY!!!!!/@comment-4473705-20120303030201/@comment-4473705-20120303030811

It is very well written and very funny. But... you could learn a little bit. I wanted to give you that constructive critique to help you. Even I'm not a perfect writer. I'm sorry if I offended you, but I just wanted to tell you how I think you could improve it. I got nailed on chat for saying this. It's amazing writing, though