User blog comment:Hybrid Shadow/The 100th Hunger Games: Through Soul and Mind/@comment-5810244-20131031025948

1. Obviously, like everyone else, I loved a scene involving my tributes. This scene was when Kent seemed to be dead for a minute, but was still alive and Genny killed Gwirren. However, if I didn't involve a scene with my tribute, it would be when Blondie, out of mercy, killed Spiridon. It seemed so sad.

2. I'm honestly upset that Steammie died, but since she's my tribute, that doesn't count. I honestly wanted Tylor to live, or to last longer, since I didn't want Fabrey's district partner to die.

3. The brutality of the writing. Some of what you write is intriguing and, if you think about it, it would be really gross (which I admire!). Every time I want to write something brutal, I always seem to mess it up, but yours is solid and concistant.

4. I honestly think that Blondie will die soon. Along with anyone whose soul mate has died, they'll be an easy target for those who both still live.


 * Also, what happened to Fabrey and Alexander? They weren't talked to at all during the bloodbath, which I don't mind because it means they survived xD, but I just want to know there whereabouts just so I know whose near. Since advice isn't allowed, I want to know what my tribute might be up against which might scary me.