User blog comment:ArleneLove'sTHG/Revenge: The 4th book of the Hunger Games/@comment-65.96.131.74-20130712205752

1. If silver is fourteen and katniss about thirty-two (seventeen when the rebellion ended plus fifteen years before primstone and cinna) how was silver alive when katniss kissed gale? Just make silver a little older and it would work.

2. Snow is portrayed as very old at the end of the rebellion plus fifteen years? I doubt he would be alive, if he was then he wouldn't be in the shape to lead a rebellion.

3. Why would people who risked their lives in a rebellion AGAINST snow, team up with him? There were no peacekeepers or Capitol lapdogs at the end of the rebellion to help.

Besides these mistakes, the writing is excellent.