User blog comment:Equestria Gurl/The 77th Hunger Games!/@comment-4344174-20130928214651

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Name: Kohle Gamma|Blade Spectrus|Skye Hepher|Lane Nashh

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Advice: Kohle: You were picked up by the hovercraft. Stay with your group and don't betray them. They can help you out. Try and form a relation with Gamzee and Duskus. They seem trustable.

Blade and Skye: Both of you are with the Aca's alliance. They're attacking the Careers. Tell them whatever they do, DO NOT kill Lane. He joined them only because he was forced in by his mentor. Try and stay out of the fighting.

Lane: The Aca's are coming, but don't tell the Careers. Remember who the real enemy is. Hide when the Aca's arrive. Please, don't die dude. If one attacks, kill them only in self-defence.

TEMPLATE FOR USERS:

What did you like about my writing?

Oh my god. Everything was awesome. I kept wanting more and more!

What can I improve on?

Maybe try and even out the POV's. Do one of each alliance per Hunger Games day and one or two loners.

Did you like how your tribute(s) were portrayed?

Well my tributes weren't really mentioned, so um I guess so.

How often should I update?

Try for every other day. It would really get some people reading even if they aren't in the games.