User blog comment:ArleneLove'sTHG/Revenge: The 4th book of the Hunger Games/@comment-68.57.145.41-20140319150720

First off i want to say that this is really good for a 13 yr old. For future reference, please use spellcheck. I found the spelling errors and miswordings to be very distracting and it took away from the book. Just type it in word or something and then paste it on your page.(also make sure you know when to use your and you're. Most people get those mixed up) Then you wont have to worry about it. Also for future reference, make sure you edit, re-edit, and edit a million times over. I am also a writer, and every time i go to add to my books i re-read everything i have previously written and i always find things that could be better. This will help you so much in the long run. It will also make you appreciate your book more because of all of the hardwork you have put in. You will always have people who will critisize you. Take what you can from their feedback and leave the rest. That is my feedback. PLEASE take note of it and i wish you the best of luck with your future writing. I apologize for any spelling errors i have. I am typing this on my phone and i have to go now. My life is calling. :D