User blog comment:Cashmere10/User blog:Cashmere10 : I am number 4 games/@comment-4890977-20140212193107/@comment-4890977-20140212195121

Lets take, for example, your message below: "Ok I just need PumPum to summit the 7 male and I can start."

What is "summit" supposed to mean for starters? I am guessing you were supposed to say "submit" but spelt it wrong. You have been doing it for the past few days too. Also let me completely correct what you have written in your blog so far. Everything in bold is something which I have corrected.

"The tributes rose up the tubes into the arena. The sun poured down on the tributes, blinding some of them for a few seconds. They looked around to see a large tropical jungle. The Cornucopia was surrounded by a field with supplies scatterd all over it. There are several piles of crates surrounded by supplies in the field and in the Cornucopia. Backpacks are also scatterd on both sides of the Cornucopia, spreading down both sides. There is a weapons rack at the back of the Cornucopia."


 * poored changed into poured
 * needs to be a comma between "tributes" and "blinding".
 * lage changed into large
 * cornicopia changed to Cornucopia
 * feild changed to field
 * cornicopia changed to Cornucopia
 * cornicopia changed to Cornucopia
 * General grammar fix in the sixth sentence.
 * wepons to weapons
 * cornicopia to Cornucopia

Also your writing is largely unimpressive and you aren't showing writing flair nor control over larger sentences. You need to use a spell checker when you write and also learn basic grammar and sentence structure.