User blog comment:Fahlcan/The 98th Hunger Games/@comment-25781987-20190524075719

Ugh... I wrote so much on my last comment but I timed out and it didn't send. Not sure I can be bothered to type it all out again, so I'll just summarise it.

These games are so good! There's not much else I can say about it since they are so good. Thank goodness for Lance's prosthetic arm though. And him getting his second kill is pretty cool too. I have a nitpicky criticism concerning Lance, and that's the fact that he isn't actually married. Other than that, I've been enjoying his character arc and portrayal.

Quick advice: Good job on learning to utilise your prosthetic arm for other purposes. But that will mean little with the alliance tension. You're going to have to distill that tension and keep as many of the other careers as loyal to you as possible. If the alliance sticks together but splits between guard duty and hunting duty, keep it to 3 in each group. Make sure Kris sticks with you so he can't talk anyone into betraying you. Even if he does try to influence the 3rd person in your party, its preferrable to him trying to influence 2 people without you knowing whether he did or not. Watch your surroundings, watch your back, be weary of the other careers and good luck.