User blog comment:Jabberjay78/One Last Games/@comment-5082922-20130411222944

By the way, the last lines:

But through all of it, through every single second, all I see is Sydnee’s face. The ocean can kill me now, it can take my last breath, it can steal my final heartbeat, and it can seize my defenseless body. But it can never take my love;ever.

As I close my eyes for one final time, I see myself on the beach with Sydnee as we kiss for the first—and the final—time, under the light of the stars.

Are very beautiful, and just explains the entire thing going on inside Lightning so well. It is really great writing, Jayjay!