User blog comment:ArleneLove'sTHG/Forever:5th book of The Hunger Games/@comment-75.73.80.139-20150402032632

I really enjoy these. You have a great imagination, but I agree with others about lining up your facts. If I remember correctly you killed Johanna in the last book so it gets a little confusing and you definitely should use Word or something with a spell check and grammar check. Otherwise I like these and will continue to read. P.S. the characters almost sound ghetto the way they talk in your books as opposed to sounding like the original. You make Haymitch say sweetheart too much and Katniss sounds like a selfish person because you always have her explain things like "Me and Peeta" instead of Peeta and I. Proof read and have someone else proof read for you before you put them up and you've got a future in the writing business. -K