User blog comment:27THG27/Risen - Crystal Gold - District 1 - Profile/@comment-5232581-20120724212532

well, its a very nice character but a lot like Glimmer and a little bit too flawless. a main character always has to have some flaws, such as Katniss wasnt very strong, calm, or an accepting, loving character. and one more tip: make the book a little more unpredictable than this character.

other than that, very well made and good luck creating the book....come to my blog soon as i am creating a book as well.

Thank you,

Rue3456